Pour Forth Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Pour Forth

Rating: 5.0

pour forth
from the ocean of you

the aches
the screams

all your torments

the bleeding of heart
the loneliness of soul
the hollowness of bones

unburden the chest
of the weight of loss

divulge from bottom
all that stagnates
your flow.

Nosheen Irfan © 2017

Tuesday, June 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry,sadness,writing
Akhtar Jawad 06 June 2017

Sadness so nicely painted, a heart touching poem!

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Muhammad Ali 06 June 2017

and it will be poem. why pain and wounds become beautiful in poems and music.

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M Asim Nehal 07 June 2017

Deep poem with philosophical touch, Melancholy chord well stuck....10+++

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The necessity to lessen the heart.Well written.

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Unwritten Soul 15 June 2017

The sadness, in this subtle writing, feel like the lament of waves at the seashore...so soft and calm but it never ending to beg the land...how much it feel in a long journey...from the ocean wide. nice poem Nosheen :) loved it

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Barry Middleton 12 June 2017

Good advice. I think I'll try to take it. (I am still not getting notifications for you poetry)

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Nosheen Irfan 13 June 2017

Barry notifications have been off since long. I stopped getting them even before you. Bad luck: -(

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 June 2017

Hi Nosheen, Wonderful! ! Your discovery that everybody carries an ocean woes and worries in his /her heart is commendable! ! And how to undo the heavy burden? You have to just... pour forth from the ocean of you.... And what do you need to pour fourth? the aches the screams- that may surface as destructive waves and invade the shores of peace or leave a heavy wreckage of all the beautiful smiles on the face/ surface, unless emptied off. It is important not to hold on to- all your torments... But you should open up... the bleeding of heart..... is easily healed when there is somebody to share it with. the loneliness of soul.... may be harmful enough to kill you, unless we reach out to our fellow beings.. the hollowness of bones... every bone is hollow, as long as we confine our woes to ourselves. So, pour out.. and unburden the chest of the weight of loss... So, you should.... divulge from bottom all that stagnates your flow. At the outset, the image of ocean has been introduced, which gels perfectly with the last lines: : - -all that stagnates/ your flow. Beautifully done... Very strong poem with a philosophical edge. But the choice of vocabulary and imagery makes it look very simple; which it is not! ! A truly Nosheenaic poem. Onto mypoemslist, with a very proud 10+++

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Daniel Brick 07 June 2017

What a strong poem this is! Many people think poetry is delicate, fragile, weak. Your poem can show them a poem can be just the opposite. You affirm each of us has a huge Interior Being you describe as an OCEAN and it has destructive as well as creative energies. You are present to guide the person to disperse the energy so it isn't counter productive. I love the confidence you express in that opening - POUR FORTH.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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