When you whisper the melody of your tears
Among green prayers of your hands for years
Pray for me
I'm deaf and blind but kind, remove my fears
I want your love, my love my eyes my ears
(2008/9/4)
Ahh, she's the one to remove your fears Her love shall be, your eyes and ears! Great read Shiraz! *10*! ! Friend Thad
shiraz, so beautiful! ! ! ! melody of tears deaf and blind but love be eyes and ears. +10 to you and this goes to my fav list. regards anjali
Nightingale you sing closed by eyes, differently you cannot sing... On it at you it is a lot of enemies, especially at night... You are kind also the god with you... 10... Tsira
yeah, I pray for u dear nightingle of shiraz your love would be yours. I donno wy cant click 10...option is inactive. anyway Allah bless U
Yet another great write from you and it seems so sincere too. Keep up the good work. :)
Wonderful write! We all need prayers. Thanks for sharing. Pat~
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful poem, both short and meanful. The short center of the poem -'pray for me'-, circled by longer lines gives a real strenght to your thought. Very well penned! 10