Prayer-Cat Poem by Loke Kok yee

Prayer-Cat

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Dear divine Bastet- - - - - - - - -of the sun or moon whatever
To you I do entreat- - - - - - - - - - - - - for I need a big favour

For rats I have been chasing- - - - -but ‘twas without success
There're issues to be solved- for they cause me great duress

For starters tell me why- - - - - - - - - or what may it be I lack
They always know I'm coming- - -have they eyes at the back?

It will be of help- - - - - - - - if they are born with longer tails
Then they'll be a cinch to catch- - - - - - O what a happy tale

Also be convenient- - - - - - - - - - - - - if I'm as small as a rat
I'll get them in their dens- - - - -where they had in safety sat
Please grant me my prayer- - - - I have been such a good cat

Prayer-Cat
Saturday, March 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: humour
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Role in Ancient Egypt. Bastet was originally a lioness warrior goddess of THE SUN throughout most of Ancient Egyptian history, but later she was changed into the CAT GODDESS which is familiar today. Greeks occupying Ancient Egypt toward the end of its civilization changed her into a goddess of THE MOON
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 26 March 2016

Oh! You have shown such a nice understanding of inter-related myths of the world and the psychology of rats and cats so as to bring out an poem. Thanks. Enjoyed reading it.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 September 2017

Loke, how you are able to understand the thoughts of cats. A divine prayer to Bastet - the Goddess of the Sun. May the prayer of the cat be fulfilled. Thank you Loke for sharing such a cute cat poem.10+

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Akhtar Jawad 25 August 2016

May God change the today's warriors in monkeys who sitting on a tree can just show their teeth only. A wonderful poem.

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Simone Inez Harriman 25 April 2016

Lol...I instantly laughed at the opening lines and I love the earnest look on the cats face. Loke your poems continue to uplift and lighten my spirit....10

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 29 March 2016

Verily, all have something to pray and beg

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Valsa George 27 March 2016

Bastest...... a cat goddess! I am hearing about that goddess for the first time. Thanks for this information, also for the sweet poem.

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