Prayers To Thou Might Poem by Santosh Sharma

Prayers To Thou Might

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Prayers To Thou Might


When the truth starts sinking
in the majority of un awakened souls
When the love is made for the
reasons and needs
When the humanity starts strangulating
Of it’s own conduct and deeds
Inner self starts looking for seclusion and solitude
Oh, Creator and Director of this drama
Change the Script and role of your puppets
Before the drama could take a tragic course.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 February 2011

Yes, the whole creation is governed on His finger tip. He may make or mar the destiny. So why can't He bail them out of their trouble before the real damage is done? Good poem with plenty of wisdom.

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Jenny Gordon 09 February 2011

Fascinating...and excellently depicted...that truth is largely perished and most souls blind, love is for the wrong reasons(?) , and mankind is destroying himself and the world; you ask the God Who created and ordained it all to deliver. Yet from His Word He shows that this is how the end shall be, with evil abounding before He finishes it all and brings in eternity. Very well described as you so simply did it, beautifully. Excellent! ! !

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Marieta Maglas 08 February 2011

As Romeo wrote his comment here, your poem is a very provoking write.Nice message.Thank you for sharing.Mari.

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Kevin Carney 06 February 2011

A thoughtful deep poem that is so need in these troubled times. so well written and so well your words are so moving.10+

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Romeo Della Valle 06 February 2011

A thought provoking write. Very deep and well penned and spiritually moving! 10+++Keep it up! Love and Peace for always...

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Terence George Craddock 17 February 2011

'Oh, Creator and Director of this drama Change the Script and role of your puppets Before the drama could take a tragic course.' The script has a mighty purpose but puppets must dance on choice string humanity was given free choice greed is but one demon seed power ring only when key commandments are obeyed do civilizations freedom sing. An interesting poem, raising the question, where is 'Proof Of Divine Obedience'?

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Pranab K Chakraborty 16 February 2011

Good writing. Time is high perhaps, inner eye should be opened quickly otherwise the civilization will go thousand feet deep under the ground perhaps. Thank you for your believe on Powerful almighty. Regards, pranab

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Unwritten Soul 12 February 2011

Living in the circus of life, we should know the role we played...God give a freedom to choose destiny and God has right to wrapped it for fate, chances is given for us to change..This writing is purely good reminder for all...the peace, the voice is make the poem really stand as it now :) - Prayers always listened by God...like it - Unwritten Soul

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Mohammad Muzzammil 10 February 2011

Nice poem indeed. Your poem presents the truth and each word hold deep message. Of course, we are nothing before Him just like puppets. Our whole life and destiny itself is the creation of His. Thanks for nice thoughts.

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Audrey Heller 10 February 2011

Your thoughts here, go very deep and make for a very good write! The whole world, is in turmoil and it would be wonderful, if we'd have peace reign, so we all could have less, to be concerned about.10

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