Pre-History Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Pre-History

Rating: 4.9


Something
in the head
freezes the mind.
If I could rip open
my brain
and alter
the egoism
and atrocities beneath,
some lives
could have been saved.

Or perhaps,
I’d just
bury the brain.
End of genocide.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruerd Visser 28 May 2009

And if the heart reigns it transcends the superficial mind into a tool of heaven. like in my poem the will of the heavens you should read it sometime its on page 2 Angelgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

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Well written its like i can see what you really think in your mind :) 10

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Ida Mustazir 27 May 2009

We often wonder about the uselessness of a mayhem. But when it evokes a creation of an art piece or beautiful poem, we astound at what mayhem exists for. Very well written, friend.

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Sadiqullah Khan 27 May 2009

Yes that is true in a way, some good time might come. good piece.10

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touching verses lead the mind to be in the same place well expressed..10++++

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 01 June 2009

really cool, lots of thoughts.........good job

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Ravi Sathasivam 01 June 2009

Excellent and strong poem. You have said it well.

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Alf Hutchison 30 May 2009

powerful... Alf

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Shashendra Amalshan 30 May 2009

dear sulaiman...your ones are short, but those words speaks a lot 'Or perhaps, I’d just bury the brain. End of genocide' and I like your expressions too..nice 10++

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Aijaz Asif 30 May 2009

'O King of all kinds what a miracle you have made in a piece of muscle and blood the angel is here, the devil is here to manipulate the mind within' - asif I have read both of your poems and i simply cay say bravo to both, thanks for sharing 10++++++ and A++++++ rgds asif

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