Something
in the head
freezes the mind.
If I could rip open
my brain
and alter
the egoism
and atrocities beneath,
some lives
could have been saved.
Or perhaps,
I’d just
bury the brain.
End of genocide.
Well written its like i can see what you really think in your mind :) 10
We often wonder about the uselessness of a mayhem. But when it evokes a creation of an art piece or beautiful poem, we astound at what mayhem exists for. Very well written, friend.
Yes that is true in a way, some good time might come. good piece.10
touching verses lead the mind to be in the same place well expressed..10++++
dear sulaiman...your ones are short, but those words speaks a lot 'Or perhaps, I’d just bury the brain. End of genocide' and I like your expressions too..nice 10++
'O King of all kinds what a miracle you have made in a piece of muscle and blood the angel is here, the devil is here to manipulate the mind within' - asif I have read both of your poems and i simply cay say bravo to both, thanks for sharing 10++++++ and A++++++ rgds asif
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
And if the heart reigns it transcends the superficial mind into a tool of heaven. like in my poem the will of the heavens you should read it sometime its on page 2 Angelgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd