Prelude To Darkness Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Prelude To Darkness

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The sea catches the scarlet of
the sky
The water is turned into blood,
innocent blood
Spilled for fun from a bottle
of champagne
The vultures fly over the waves
of bloodshed
to plunder the dead flesh
The sky and the sea meet
where the sun sets
The world is red,
blood red
A prelude to darkness

Nosheen Irfan © 2016
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Prelude To Darkness
Monday, March 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: violence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 17 March 2016

I really like your poem as it fuses a number of images into a single imagery of sort.. Water is always associated with life, so is sun.. But here, I feel, the twilight sun symbolises a kind of power that is working towards destruction. The image of the 'red sea' is an apt one.. Blood being poured out of a champange bottle (¿¿) - perhaps suggestive of the kind of near sadistic pleasure that is often derived from war by a number of people.. Hitler, for one, might have actually 'enjoyed' killing the Jews.. Bloodshed is often celebrated.. The vultures do roam over dead bodies in a battlefield. And now I feel I understand your metaphor of the 'setting sun'.. It is perhaps continually eroding human values and humanity.. As the human in us dies the SHAITAN comes out.. And then there is only one way to proceed - towards more bloodshed and destruction.. Redemption is rare... Thanks for sharing Nosheen.

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Nosheen Irfan 17 March 2016

Thanks for such an insightful interpretation Souren.

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Mike Smith 16 March 2016

Fantastic imagery and great conclusion. A prelude to darkness. Stunning piece

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 March 2016

War! ! ! The world is red. Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 14 March 2016

The darkness has been settlng in for a very long time, soon to be pitch black if nothing changes. Thanks, Nosheen

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Lahore, Pakistan
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