Prisoner Of One`s Own Words Poem by ONElia AVElar

'We stay together - you and me, as long as we feel free...' The sentiment is right there - freedom to love should not be bound by words - feelings should dictate...another gem here One. Clever stuff. j x

In a web cautiously moving steps as well as words

love still flows by the words as when pledged to its whisper even locked by the speckles when bristles yet by its reeks of illusion in its room still not deluded as we do feel as prisoner as the passion seemingly listless by diffusion..................one of the most powerful poem by the imagery yet of unique genere, love when seems to be the game of love by words that happens to happen then and there.......splendid work by the ingenuity,10/10, thanks for sharing

A work of art... I believe that we choose to love, indeed. t x

'We stay together - you and me, as long as we feel free...' though love is lock

You seem to raise a dilemma in the 'PS' which I recognise - we are voluntary 'prisoners' when we love, no matter how we protest that declarations, words, can't be binding on lovers. 'Be kind - do not take the key' is an original thought about the lover's situation - bound voluntarily, at the mercy of the loved one. I hope I read this aright? As usual, your poem is condensed and mysterious, so that my comments, in contrast, are wordy and inept. Sorry I've taken so long to discover this interesting piece, One. x Jan

Two themes bound together in a delicate fabric - the key to security is in the way we use words which bind us to our beliefs...

It's really amazing freedom, very modern approach.10 for it.

Words can come back to haunt, but only if we look at the words and not the person....beautiful sentiments here...Coach

I love the message in this poem Onelia, makes me think. And yes, we sometimes do make people prisoner's of their own words. Unfortunately our words may stay but feelings can change. HG: -) xxx