*** Priyatam *** Poem by ANJALI SINHA

*** Priyatam ***

Rating: 4.4


Rakhtat leheele me
Nav thumche,
Hrudayacha sonyechaya paanavar,
Survaath Priya thumhee,
anee Antaat pan thumhee.

19-10-2008
This is my own compostion written in Marathi a regional language in India
My mothers mother tongue.

Translation.

(I have written your name
in blood,
on the golden leaves of my heart
You my Love- are the alpha
and you alone are the omega)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahfooz Ali 22 February 2009

plz mat remove karwao na.......... achcha lag raha hai........ hehehehehe.......

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Mahfooz Ali 22 February 2009

Who is this priyatam? Mera naam to Mahfooz hai......... hehehehehehe..........

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 31 January 2009

a lovely write..the first and last in love written in gold...wonderful

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Ben Gieske 13 January 2009

Gold and love make a wonderful pair. And a name is as good as a person. Very nice combination and a wonderful thought with the first and last letters of the Greek alphabet tieing them altogether. Well phrased.

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Rakesh Singh 24 November 2008

r u in love? ? ? ? ? ? b, coz this feelings may comes only from a heart in love

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Ken E Hall 27 February 2010

Mum, s the word..alpha one of the Greek letters used to guide the planes in the sky and our lives..poignant++++10 regards

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Soumyendu Biswas 24 August 2009

Changli! ....

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Subroto Chatterjee 24 May 2009

Chaan, pori, chaan..Mala tumcha he poem avadla! [The benefit of staying in Mumbai and schooling in Maharashtra's premier hill station....]. Ankhi liha....[One of my fav writer is Sane Guruji] Cheers. Subroto

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Allemagne Roßmann 22 March 2009

I have already started writing it on my walls

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Reetessh Sabrr 15 March 2009

too good..this is a suprise..u can write in marathi too thanks 2 ur mom and u dint tell this earlier

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