tanvi damle

Prom! $e Of Love

It's so hard to believe that he's gone,
everything seems a blur, so wrong.
You sit there and stare at your ring,
this couldn't be happening, not him.
You feel all drained and all alone,
You hate to go to the place you once called home.
As you sit and clutch tightly to his clothes,
you remember all his promises, his vows.
He's so far away yet so near,
he's always there to wipe away your every tear.
As you stare at the bed where he layed,
you somehow still find him there by your side.
When you look at his picture all you wanna do is cry,
but you know that in your heart he'll always live by.
You still remember his touch, his kiss,
and you yearn for his presence that you so much miss.
You smile through your tears as you remember,
him catching your hand and promising to always be together.
You don't have to let him go if you don't want to,
He's up there smiling and looking down at you.
He's with you whatever you do, wherever you go,
through all your ups and downs, highs and lows.
As you remember his voice, his laughter,
you know that he'll live on forever.
Every night when in your dreams you him see,
you know that he was yours and always shall be.

Poem Submitted: Monday, January 18, 2010
Poem Edited: Monday, January 18, 2010

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  • Braja K Sarkar (12/5/2011 3:15:00 AM)

    Full of sweet thoughts of love.nicely expressed in this poem..I think only a true lover can tell this way..Thanks Tanvi...

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  • Shekhar JoshiShekhar Joshi (1/23/2010 8:09:00 AM)

    beautifully written....this was ur best for me till now.......maybe coz i have written something close to it......
    liked it anyways............... ;)

    hey y dont u look up at mine(the similar themed one) ......namely 'forever remains......'

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  • Darlene Styles (1/22/2010 11:48:00 AM)

    very deep. i like it

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  • anurag duggal (1/22/2010 6:22:00 AM)

    we should not obsess about whats gone....life is to live not brood so live it gal

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  • Disturbed angel in a straight jacket (1/21/2010 7:32:00 AM)

    i like this poem, good job :) ! ! ! !

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  • Joseph Poewhit (1/21/2010 4:38:00 AM)

    Words have a real togetherness.

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  • Rajaram RamachandranRajaram Ramachandran (1/19/2010 7:59:00 PM)

    A lovely love poem from a teen aged.

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  • dance angel (1/19/2010 12:20:00 PM)

    this is so great very good indeed

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  • Tom Golding (1/19/2010 12:20:00 PM)

    Emotive and touching. Watch the tenses and grammer though when rhyming the end of a line.

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  • Fay SlimmFay Slimm (1/19/2010 8:50:00 AM)

    An emotive sharing of loss - - and with a tender undercurrent you have succeeded in appeal to the reader.... well written. 10 from Fay.

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  • Aira Olayvar (1/18/2010 11:01:00 PM)

    While reading the poem I can feel the emotions of losing someone… the emotions itself is present, which makes it good… but to where is he has no exact clue… though if I were to conclude your man has already went to his resting place though the memories remains. If my conclusion is somehow true… just get back on me… tell me how ok? Only if you don’t mind.

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  • Luke Easter (1/18/2010 9:23:00 PM)

    Where has he gone? How did he go? This is incomplete.

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  • David Mountain (1/18/2010 1:08:00 PM)

    Touching emotion which are part of lifes experience. David M.

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  • Tanay Pathak (1/18/2010 9:00:00 AM)

    People who loose, are the only people who understand........If you remove all the HE's and add SHE's then this is the same as me, seriously...

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (1/18/2010 8:51:00 AM)

    quite passionate, eloquently evocative as love when intense, well penned, keep on writing by your poetic surge,10+, thanks for sharing

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  • Ameur Amer (1/18/2010 8:18:00 AM)

    Wonderful sense and very beautiful words, has a deep meaning in our lives..keep wiriting my friend.

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  • C. P. SharmaC. P. Sharma (1/18/2010 7:55:00 AM)

    There is poetic justice in this poem.
    CP

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  • Chitra - (1/18/2010 7:38:00 AM)

    Rich in emotion. The ups and downs of love. well written!

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (1/18/2010 7:14:00 AM)

    That's love and its game plan...we never know how it turns out in the end...good write Tanvi...sentiments pouring in there...10

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