Prom! $e Of Love Poem by tanvi damle

Prom! $e Of Love

Rating: 3.0


It's so hard to believe that he's gone,
everything seems a blur, so wrong.
You sit there and stare at your ring,
this couldn't be happening, not him.
You feel all drained and all alone,
You hate to go to the place you once called home.
As you sit and clutch tightly to his clothes,
you remember all his promises, his vows.
He's so far away yet so near,
he's always there to wipe away your every tear.
As you stare at the bed where he layed,
you somehow still find him there by your side.
When you look at his picture all you wanna do is cry,
but you know that in your heart he'll always live by.
You still remember his touch, his kiss,
and you yearn for his presence that you so much miss.
You smile through your tears as you remember,
him catching your hand and promising to always be together.
You don't have to let him go if you don't want to,
He's up there smiling and looking down at you.
He's with you whatever you do, wherever you go,
through all your ups and downs, highs and lows.
As you remember his voice, his laughter,
you know that he'll live on forever.
Every night when in your dreams you him see,
you know that he was yours and always shall be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 18 January 2010

quite passionate, eloquently evocative as love when intense, well penned, keep on writing by your poetic surge,10+, thanks for sharing

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Tanay Pathak 18 January 2010

People who loose, are the only people who understand........If you remove all the HE's and add SHE's then this is the same as me, seriously...

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David Mountain 18 January 2010

Touching emotion which are part of lifes experience. David M.

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Luke Easter 18 January 2010

Where has he gone? How did he go? This is incomplete.

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Aira Olayvar 18 January 2010

While reading the poem I can feel the emotions of losing someone… the emotions itself is present, which makes it good… but to where is he has no exact clue… though if I were to conclude your man has already went to his resting place though the memories remains. If my conclusion is somehow true… just get back on me… tell me how ok? Only if you don’t mind.

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Braja K Sarkar 05 December 2011

Full of sweet thoughts of love.nicely expressed in this poem..I think only a true lover can tell this way..Thanks Tanvi...

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Shekhar Joshi 23 January 2010

beautifully written....this was ur best for me till now.......maybe coz i have written something close to it...... liked it anyways............... ;) hey y dont u look up at mine(the similar themed one) ......namely 'forever remains......'

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Darlene Styles 22 January 2010

very deep. i like it

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anurag duggal 22 January 2010

we should not obsess about whats gone....life is to live not brood so live it gal

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i like this poem, good job :) ! ! ! !

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