Quiet At Much Poem by kite remedy

Beautifully written words...yes love does turn it's volume down when the one you love isn't around...thank you for this...Fi

Huhuhuhu... so sad... Loose somebody that we loved, Make our world quite, and silence, , , But that's no way to give up, right? ? I loved this one, ,10+ for this lovely poem, , Naru Kaede,

seems a nice gully now that she's not around, one has understood and found, that happiness does decrease its intensity and amount,

a very beautiful write sir, i love the way you write you thoughts, its so smooth and easy to understand and yes i agree it do feels like this when someone close to you leaves....i loved it, thanks for sharing 10+++ rgds asif

Hm...I know the sort of quiet you're talking about. Emotion beautifully coveyed in your rhythmic rhetoric...great work! Caroline

So nice..... I like how this moves... Very well... ~Krista~

Let us allow that quietness to continue and we shall enjoy!

This is really nice like how it says everything becomes quiet but the heart does not

Very nice...quiet can be lonely sometimes. I liked the way you created what quiet really means to you.

fantastic poem really there was alot of effort put in to it