Righteous deed in every step u follow
Interest in each good work you posses
Certain food you take for good health
Easily drive life boat in restive sea.
Rice is a righteous food mainly used in India and many countries in Asia. I too love taking rice and curry.
In righteous path we should walk. Sweet flute of God produces sweet sound for learning. We feel God's love with greatest sweetness. His flute is nice. You are a nice poet and this poem is an excellent poem.
Rice surprises me, , perfectly done...10 Surprise Saturday,20th October 2018 Sure Undertaking and Redressal of Problems Reassures Immediate Solution and Echoes Hasmukh Mehta
A wise advice well crafted into an acrostic poem...indeed a good one Kumar... thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
In restive sea! ! Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing.