Rain, rain, its always raining,
Rain, rain, I end up saying,
Rain, rain, please go away now,
Rain, rain, just leave right now,
Rain, rain, don’t know how,
I don’t care how,
To make my rainy day just go away…
So I stand,
in the pouring rain,
So I can,
feel the growing pain,
Of having rain,
coming down like the Armageddon flame.
I can see raindrops playing their game,
Even though they look the same,
I know that there is more to rain……
rain is the worst huh? ..i love this poem..it expresses how desperate we can be to jus have all the sun come..but embrace the rain it makes the sunny days more meaningful..i love this poem though..so stand in the rain..cuz it'l make ur sunn that much sweeter.
It very quickly made me think of that old cliche 'Rain, rain go away come again another day'. Good poem, lots of rain.--Melvina--
yes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! rain, please go away! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! YOU HAD MEDE MY LONG HAIR A BAD SMELL! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
invoking poem....rain brings both ablessing and a curse, your onomatopoeic language filled the view with rain...... nice venture
Well.....I liked the poem, but I am afraid I don't agree with you not liking the rain but however my money is on the fact that you live some where where it rains all the time, and you hate it, yes? If not than you live some where where it rains not at all and you where having a wet time....but I could still be wrong and you cold have just wrighten this poum to mess with me but you know I just don't see that as being true :) very nice. 9
your poem is kinda cute... it remind me to a friend of mine who love rain, opposite with i am..
I like it alot. Its pretty cool. I dont always like Rain either. BUt some times i like to dance in the rain
Well, you get accross your point, but it just 'reads' try putting more of how you feel, make the reader feel your feelings. I will read more.. keep writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Rain and emotion have always spoken to the poet. I liked this poem. Keep posting and bravo.