Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 116,795 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Rainbow - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

After seeing the colorful arch
I ran for my torch,
I wanted to know
where is the arrow!
Is it travelling to infinity?
No, it's least interested in divinity,
I found it in my heart,
reflected to her eyes through my art
with a bouquet of red roses
to gain love after so many losses.

Topic(s) of this poem: rainbow

Comments about Rainbow by Akhtar Jawad

  • (6/25/2017 11:18:00 AM)

    Your words are all you need
    Melt rocks and make hearts bleed
    Your poem so sublime
    For sure love bells will chime
    Thank you sir.
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  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (6/23/2017 11:00:00 AM)

    Akhtar Sahab, a fantastic rainbow and a reflection of the rainbow in your heart with colours of the rainbow,
    a bouquet of red roses and loads of love! Even Cupid would look down with defeat! ! !
    Wonderful array of thoughts! :) 100
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  • Valsa George (6/20/2017 11:03:00 AM)

    Akhtar ji..why look for Cupid's arrow
    When love is in your heart and marrow
    I see you soaring like a sparrow
    Singing aloud love's soprano
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  • Nosheen Irfan (6/20/2017 3:51:00 AM)

    Beautifully written. A short but powerful write.10 (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (6/19/2017 11:24:00 PM)

    Gaining love with bouquet of lovable roses is interesting with vision of colourful rays. Even after some losses life blossoms seeing this colourful arch. Mind blows with to see rainbow and feel life. Love is really gained reading such an excellent poem shared here...10 (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (6/19/2017 11:19:00 PM)

    Philosophical write on rainbow. Fantastic expression. Enjoyed with attractive photograph provided. Many thanks dear Jawadji....10 (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (6/19/2017 10:39:00 PM)

    An instant comment on Valsa Gerge's poem Rainbow. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 19, 2017

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