Sleek blurred silhouettes
beneath colored umbrellas
shun falling silver.
On the path to golden sun
strangers all walk together.
Loved the imagery, silhouettes and umbrella wonderful combination
2) " On the path to golden sun strangers all walk together" what more? 5***
Marvellous.. One of the best Tania's I have read. Rain is one unique phenomenon everyone, especially poets admire. A person born and living in Kerala India, which is served by two monsoons, I am never tired of rains. Rains bring people together, rejuvenate.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent Tanka Evelyn, after every shower the sun emerges. Photosynthesis in action, and poets in action! Great write.