Rainy Day Silhouettes Poem by Evelyn Judy Buehler

Rainy Day Silhouettes

Rating: 4.9


Sleek blurred silhouettes
beneath colored umbrellas
shun falling silver.
On the path to golden sun
strangers all walk together.

Rainy Day Silhouettes
Wednesday, May 17, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,beauty,people,imagery,rain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is in the tanka form. Photo by shonti25 at Pixabay
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 18 May 2023

Excellent Tanka Evelyn, after every shower the sun emerges. Photosynthesis in action, and poets in action! Great write.

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Pallavi Tripathi 19 May 2023

Loved the imagery, silhouettes and umbrella wonderful combination

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Your gracious response means so much. Thank you.

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Anjandev Roy 19 May 2023

This is simply glorious.....thank u....

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I appreciate your kind words more than I can say.

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2) " On the path to golden sun strangers all walk together" what more? 5***

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Thank you so much for your very valuable comment.

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Marvellous.. One of the best Tania's I have read. Rain is one unique phenomenon everyone, especially poets admire. A person born and living in Kerala India, which is served by two monsoons, I am never tired of rains. Rains bring people together, rejuvenate.

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M. Asim Nehal 18 May 2023

Nice poem, cute and smart.5****

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Thank you very much for your kind, thoughtful comment.

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