Rainy Night Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Rainy Night

Rating: 5.0


Can you twinkle like an evening star?
When clouds have covered the entire sky
If you shine like a full moon tonight
Though not a night bird but I promise to fly

The star twinkling below black clouds
Will be so close to awaiting earth
And the moon shining with a Venus
Will be enough to make up the dearth!

My wings will be wet and I might fall down
But my love is a magic I shall kiss your palms
I promise I shall not let you go back alone
I will hold you in my very weak arms.

After restless days and sleepless nights
Let the rains change the scenario tonight
It's dark and muddy it will give stains
But the path of love has glowworms' light.

Wednesday, July 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: rainy night
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 19 July 2017

Oh, what a beautiful poem on rainy night and love it is! Thrilling expression with nice penmanship. Thank you dear Jawadji for posting this.

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Khalida Bano Ali 15 September 2017

So beautiful............................................................

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Valsa George 08 August 2017

I promise I shall not let you go back alone I will hold you in my very weak arms. A great assurance........! Lovely poem....!

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Loke Kok Yee 02 August 2017

The stars will twinkle when you write and the moon will shine through a cloud filled night. Your lovely poem lights up my heart. Thank you sir.

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After restless days and sleepless nights Let the rains change the scenario tonight It's dark and muddy it will give stains But the path of love has glowworms' light. Akhtar Sahab! Beautiful poem! May the rains shower its blessings on us. May the bright glow worms dance at night. Thank you so much! i can feel the rain and the sweet smell of mud. A full vote, Sir.

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Khalid Saifullah 19 July 2017

What a beautiful poem............................................................................

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