Random Ruminations- 2 Poem by Valsa George

Random Ruminations- 2

Rating: 5.0


Not all is disclosed to view
Untraveled lies the trackless course
Not every puzzle is intended to be solved

How much stays hidden from sight
As caverns under an aquamarine sea,
Life's perplexing maze stretches far
Mysteries lie buried in fathomless deep
Like dregs of truth settled at the bottom
Attempting to unravel them all at once
Is trying to gulp down an ocean in a single draught!

Life is a foggy valley, blurred
Obscuring manifold vistas ahead
We have to wait till the fog clears
Then truth will dance like the flame,
Of a burning candle before our eyes!

Thursday, January 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: mystery,waiting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 22 February 2019

So true. We cannot discover the whole world in a few moments. Physics is now studying the quantum behavior of the smallest particles and are racing against each to understand it. It needs time. In the process we hear the most unlikely hypotheses gain traction. Slowly nature lets itself to be revealed. Rushing to understand all leads to false beliefs

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Valsa George 04 March 2019

You have understood the poem in its very essence! Thank you dear poet friend!

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 February 2019

Life is a foggy valley! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 10 February 2019

Thanks Edward.....! Happy that you have visited my page!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 February 2019

This most beautifully worded poem reminds me of a Dutch saying, in the end, truth will be revealed.. The clue of this poem lies in the last two lines of the final stanza. Loveliest constructed, Valsa, there is a prologue, the body and an epilogue. Your poetic words make the poem a true Beauty. I have enjoyed a very lot. A 10 and much much more

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Valsa George 06 February 2019

Thanks a lot Sylvia for your lovely comment! Your latest profile picture looks beautiful.....!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 February 2019

its been ages since we traversed each others pages ur spiritually philosophical as i dwell in rages lovely r ur intense sages contained in ur pages

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Valsa George 06 February 2019

We shall visit each other's pages more often! I am so glad for your poetic comment! Thank you! Hail the poet's Poet!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 February 2019

Life is a foggy valley and this is difficult to solve every puzzle. But still we have brief and positive hope for living peacefully. Truth never hides. Feathers of falsehood cannot cover truth. Truth dances like a flame dances over lamp. Burning candle is just an excellent example of its. This is nice poem beautifully penned....10

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Valsa George 06 February 2019

Truth cannot be hidden for long! It will oneday show itself out! Thank you Kumaramani sir for this lovely comment!

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