Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 190,847 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Rays Are Planning To Touch - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Rays are rising slowly in East
They are planning to touch us
On the peak of mountains we see
They are ruffling their feathers.

Wow, this is so wonderful to see
We hear songs of flying birds
Beauty of broken clouds again
They make canvas of sky rosy.

Pink and red mix to golden rays
To write new story of early dawn
All creatures are eagerly singing
This is planning and mind blowing.

Rays are now planning to touch us
To teach wisdom of God sure we feel
Having art of love again we dance
Rays are wonderful in East sky.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, morning, spiritual


Comments about Rays Are Planning To Touch by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Akhtar Jawad (1/24/2016 8:48:00 PM)


    A nice metaphoric poem, with all the mastery of Mhakul. (Report) Reply

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  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/21/2016 2:58:00 AM)


    A lovely poem just like peace giving....liked it....thank u for sharing :) (Report) Reply

  • (1/21/2016 12:35:00 AM)


    A magnificent work. The metaphor in the first stanza is unforgettable. And the message that each new day offers new life is wisdom to live by. A great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/20/2016 1:58:00 PM)


    And live is ever ready. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Spock The Vegan (1/19/2016 6:35:00 PM)


    Although the sun has gone down here, your words are enlightening. TFS (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 19, 2016



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