It's hard to distinguish
the real and the fake
when you realize
it's too late
You are been looted
and left with empty shelves
Only option is to take
a gun and shoot yourself
Does it end or give a
solution?
For sure people will forget you
and give a fullstop as conclusion
There are other options. However, I like your poem. The last line shows poetic strength.
It's hard to distinguish the real and the fake when you realize it's too late.....correct.
For sure people will forget you and give a fullstop as conclusion.......Rini, it's indeed a thought provoking poem! ..............10
A very perceptive write. So very true. We should be cautious on whom we are dealing with. An interesting poem that deals with realities of life.10
A thought provoking poem so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Not a perfect solution Rini though its a very nice poem. Better take care before you get looted. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.