Real Or Fake Poem by Rini Shibu

Real Or Fake

Rating: 5.0


It's hard to distinguish
the real and the fake
when you realize
it's too late
You are been looted
and left with empty shelves
Only option is to take
a gun and shoot yourself
Does it end or give a
solution?
For sure people will forget you
and give a fullstop as conclusion

Sunday, August 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 26 August 2018

Not a perfect solution Rini though its a very nice poem. Better take care before you get looted. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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A fan 26 August 2018

A work of value and substance! Well penned!

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Good Effort 26 August 2018

There are other options. However, I like your poem. The last line shows poetic strength.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 August 2018

Rini, such an outstanding poem....10++++

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Lamar Cole 26 August 2018

This is a very thought provoking poem about real or fake.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 November 2022

It's hard to distinguish the real and the fake when you realize it's too late.....correct.

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Tom Allport 31 August 2018

A poem with a people warning? ..........well penned Rini

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 August 2018

For sure people will forget you and give a fullstop as conclusion.......Rini, it's indeed a thought provoking poem! ..............10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 August 2018

A very perceptive write. So very true. We should be cautious on whom we are dealing with. An interesting poem that deals with realities of life.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 August 2018

A thought provoking poem so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10

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