Rebirth Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Rebirth

Rating: 4.3


Left out without the pain,
Numbness in my heart regained;
Lifeless is the breath I take;
Unnecessary life I make.

Sweet poison, love on strings:
Rebirth of dreamy wings!
If I could taste again,
To fly my soul away...

Bells toll in beating heart,
Love sensing in a start;
Ardent blood of life vibrating,
New dimension soul's attending:

‘Come to me, we'll merge in one! '
In mind the vision as The One: —
‘I will receive the life profoundly,
For half-dead I am...still standing'.

Friday, March 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy,love,dreaming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2018

Come to me, we'll merge in one! In mind the vision as The One; I will receive the life profoundly, For half-dead I am...still standing......so touching and profound. A beautiful poem on life and love nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

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Terry Craddock 12 December 2016

'Left out without the pain, Numbness in my heart regained; Lifeless is the breath I take, Unnecessary life I make.' life and time weave such feelings into our lives but 'Come to me, we'll merge in one! ' In mind the vision as The One; 'I will receive the life profoundly, For half-dead I am...still standing.' with these ardent words reading like Shakespeare, sometimes the pain ferments a depth of sound seasoned in beautiful penetrating insights

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 June 2016

To fly my soul away! ! Nice piece of work.

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