~ Recipe Of My First Kiss ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Recipe Of My First Kiss ~

Rating: 4.8


RECIPE OF MY FIRST KISS
Ms. Nivedita
UK.
26.11.09.

‘Why you’,
Dame says,
‘Fear hiss
In first kiss? ’

~ DAME RECIPING ~

[1] Recipe of
Lip-Lock liquor
Brewing in
5 square centimeter
Lip arena beaut emitter.

[2] Adding: ~
Pentabyte of evocation,
Giga calorie of
Ebullient emotion,
Zillion luxe of imagination.
.
[3] Hues of lips’
Are crisscrossing
Tongues’ balleting
Mouth fresheners’
Fragrance swapping
Saliva immixing
[Of 10 ml LOL! ].


~ A FEW MINUTES AFTER ~

Propinquity...
Proximity…
Closing…
Nearing n’ togethering
Passionate conjoining
Heart beats merging
Pooch-ing n’ Pooch-ing
Lips splicing
Quivering n’ fluttering.
.
Hiked adrenaline
Feelings steeping
Deepening n’ diving
Smothering enlivening
Euphoriant levitating.

Voluptuous liquid firing
Every cells dancing
Flutter n’ quivering
Tipsiness joyous greening
Infatuation drinking
Unioned lapping
Solace gulping.


~ FINALLY ~

Dame says,
Hey Beau
It’s relation just
Zeroed lust!

First kiss
Why you
Fear hiss?
No: Its
Flowething bliss.

Happened like must
Juxtaposition of
Four lips in trust.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sreekala Sukumaran 06 June 2010

well written very lovely poem liked it 10+++

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Prateep Sengupta 02 June 2010

With due apology to the learned member, I do not find the expression in this poem 'vulgar'. Yes, they are bordering some crude facts but can the realities of life be really separated from art? At the same time, it is a fact that there are many other poems of Niv which fascinate us more than this.

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Rinki Nandy 28 May 2010

Unioned lapping Solace gulping. deep poem on first kiss.....you just glorified the term and the memories and explained why is the first so important! 10++

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Lynn Glover 23 May 2010

I'm sure all readers have experienced the his kiss and want to thank you for taking us all down memory lane with this great poem. Lynn

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Sadiqullah Khan 03 May 2010

This is the path, in fact. Lucky ones are chosen for that kiss. Inventive and very different.10

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Ray Quesada 04 October 2012

Another great poem, Niv! ! -RQ-

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Kevin Carney 26 December 2010

What a great write, its fun and light and so true. I really like the way you took you poem and wrote outside of the box. Loved it 10+++

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veronique buea pre 03 September 2010

dear Ms.niv lovely poem i loved it very much :)

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Paul Butters 30 August 2010

You clearly have NOT skimped your research N. ah ah. Your vocabulary is impressive, very. High marks fr originality again. P.

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Marina Gasbey 03 August 2010

Wow, your way of writing surprises me every time, you are a great poet. Very intelligent as well, you could probably describe anything in the world! Thank you so much for sharing! .... Marina...

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