RECIPE OF MY FIRST KISS
Ms. Nivedita
UK.
26.11.09.
‘Why you’,
Dame says,
‘Fear hiss
In first kiss? ’
~ DAME RECIPING ~
[1] Recipe of
Lip-Lock liquor
Brewing in
5 square centimeter
Lip arena beaut emitter.
[2] Adding: ~
Pentabyte of evocation,
Giga calorie of
Ebullient emotion,
Zillion luxe of imagination.
.
[3] Hues of lips’
Are crisscrossing
Tongues’ balleting
Mouth fresheners’
Fragrance swapping
Saliva immixing
[Of 10 ml LOL! ].
~ A FEW MINUTES AFTER ~
Propinquity...
Proximity…
Closing…
Nearing n’ togethering
Passionate conjoining
Heart beats merging
Pooch-ing n’ Pooch-ing
Lips splicing
Quivering n’ fluttering.
.
Hiked adrenaline
Feelings steeping
Deepening n’ diving
Smothering enlivening
Euphoriant levitating.
Voluptuous liquid firing
Every cells dancing
Flutter n’ quivering
Tipsiness joyous greening
Infatuation drinking
Unioned lapping
Solace gulping.
~ FINALLY ~
Dame says,
Hey Beau
It’s relation just
Zeroed lust!
First kiss
Why you
Fear hiss?
No: Its
Flowething bliss.
Happened like must
Juxtaposition of
Four lips in trust.
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With due apology to the learned member, I do not find the expression in this poem 'vulgar'. Yes, they are bordering some crude facts but can the realities of life be really separated from art? At the same time, it is a fact that there are many other poems of Niv which fascinate us more than this.
Unioned lapping Solace gulping. deep poem on first kiss.....you just glorified the term and the memories and explained why is the first so important! 10++
I'm sure all readers have experienced the his kiss and want to thank you for taking us all down memory lane with this great poem. Lynn
This is the path, in fact. Lucky ones are chosen for that kiss. Inventive and very different.10
What a great write, its fun and light and so true. I really like the way you took you poem and wrote outside of the box. Loved it 10+++
You clearly have NOT skimped your research N. ah ah. Your vocabulary is impressive, very. High marks fr originality again. P.
Wow, your way of writing surprises me every time, you are a great poet. Very intelligent as well, you could probably describe anything in the world! Thank you so much for sharing! .... Marina...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
well written very lovely poem liked it 10+++