Those days were gone
When I was your flute
and you were the breath
Together we produced
mind blowing tones
Flute without a blow
is a dead piece of wood
Burning into ashes
in the fireplace of memories
giving you warmth
Wish those ashes you would add
in the pot of red roses
So I can give a fragnant retreat
and adorn your mind and soul
When I was your flute and you were the breath Together we produced mind blowing tones..........Sad tones but still adoring ur lover. very nice poem.. thank u.. dev
When you were the breath and I was your flute. A beautiful love that went wrong.
Some memories of the past bring melancholy and grief and murks the life Dear Rini, you have beautifully painted this in your poem. Thanks for sharing.
This is a very beautiful and heartfelt poem that could bring tears to the eyes.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Mind and soul! ! With positive morals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks for reading and commenting Edward