Red Soul Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Red Soul

Rating: 5.0


Really a selfless soul,
entirely a lover of poetry,
doesn't want any returns from us.
Surely he knows,
our sentiments for him
uploaded in a basket of flowers,
love is its name, at any time may become a garland.

(Red soul is just a reader. No, he is a selfless lover of poetry.
I believe after reading so many poems he will be a poet and I shall be proud to write a comment on his poem)

Thursday, June 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: reader
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 28 June 2018

This poem that has been astutely and nicely inscribed in favour of Red Soul, a reader in poem Hunter, is a great tribute to him. It is written in acrostic form and is interesting to read. Beautiful poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 June 2018

EARLIER SOULS WERE HE AND SHE NOW AJ SIR YOU also give colour to it Yes here I know it's RED SOUL HE COMMENTED on my latest poem

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Red Soul 28 June 2018

I don't know how I am supposed to respond to this Jawad sahab, but say I am humbled by your gesture. I am really grateful to you and the other poets here who post wonderful poems. Aapka dil se sukhriya Jawad sahab. Ek bohut khubsoorat din bitayiye sir: -)

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The Real Truth 09 August 2018

Red Idiot and Red Soul is Judith Blatherwick. She was the Crow, The Truth and is tormenting this site. See Andy Brookes poem The Tormentors plus Coward.and Rini Shibu COWARD. She does the same on other sites. She has about 100 names in this site. Please don't support this mad woman..

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A true tribute to a pure, selfless soul who is here only to give not to get. I salute the Red Soul! Thank you so much Akhtar Sahab! ......10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 June 2018

This is a different kind of poem sir! It is very difficult on my part to comment! I have come across with comments from many non-poets in pseudonyms like Red Soul, Real man, Sin Ink etc etc..Fortunately, I have got some good remarks, for e'g, a Sin Ink suggested me to rectify my syllable counts..I immediately did it! I won't go further...

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 June 2018

I like this pure stainless sentence - love is its name, at any time may become a garland

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Red Soul 28 June 2018

P: S: It is not that I don't want anything in return, I want more poems from you that I can read everyday: D

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