Offering: one MT love
Payment: one MT dream
Barter relationship
Offering: one hug and 10+
Payment: one kiss and 10+
Zero+ relationship
Offering: eight hours labor
Payment: one day survival
Exploitation relationship
Offering: lifelong service
Payment: pension benefit
Engineering relationship
an interesting, mind blowing, humor filled poem... lovely! !
various relationships...some exploiting...some casual...some long lasting brought out well in this write
Offering: lifelong service Payment: pension benefit Engineering relationship....... we do for growingthe relatiosnship. it is permanent bonding try and suceed also.... beautiful write...10 read mine butteflies around and sparatw ways...tks
I appreciate the finesse of speech and the acuity of observations about the reality of the day.10+++
I just luv the irony! Thanks also for commenting my poems.That was very kind of you.
Wellpenned the relation between complicated life and our deeds.
Interesting poem. Whether cheerful? For me rather not. These are sad observations, if it is real. It is written very well but it doesn't surprise me. Your poems are being read with pleasure, since it is always possible to find something what will interest us in. (10 v.) Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very interesting and humorous write! As a relationship must work satisfactorily, so I'll give a tenner with a smile.