A willing captive
Of your narcissistic charm
I chased you down the road
To nowhere
Took you for a savior
When you were nothing
But a bait of Lucifer
Release me
From this love
That offers me no grass
To put my bare-feet on
That offers me no sky
To send a prayer to
This love…
Like a black hole
Sucking me deeper
To feed your titanic ego
Let me go
I don't want the Eden
Your smile seems to promise me
Let me go
To burn in hell
For no damnation
Is worse than
An unrequited love.
After going through the poet's notes, I feel you have reflected somebody's emotions through your pen! Whatever may be, this is a fabulous poem!
A very powerful write. The emotions put on this marvelous write is so intense that a reader could be carried away with the thoughts of the brilliant Poetess. Very stirring and beautifully written. To my Poem List.
The portal of Lucifer's character makes the poem great..an excellent poem!
Let me go! ! ! Love and pain; Come along and, Release me! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Let me go To burn in For no damnation Is worse than An unrequited love......emotion regarding love and pain is touchingly expressed here. Dear madam, you have so astutely and movingly inscribed this poem for which it is a brilliant one.10
I dedicate this poem to Anteros, the Ancient Greek god of requited love, on behalf of the poet. For Anteros, love could only be requited love. He had a special disdain for those who didn't return someone's sincere love. Anteros brought misery upon them. He was the brother of Eros.
Hi Nosheen, What a violent revelation: “”no damnation Is worse than An unrequited love. “ Lovely Poetry. A 100+++++++++ and onto MyPoemList, so that I am reminded to come back for a re...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A poem carrying great substance emanating from the feelings and emotions of poetess! I wanted to put spotlight on the depth of your inner expression: Took you for a savior/When you were nothing/But a bait of Lucifer...I call it poetry when a poet expresses his/her heart, feelings and emotions………an excellent poem!
Gratitude sir! Humbled and honored.