Release Me Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Release Me

Rating: 5.0


A willing captive
Of your narcissistic charm
I chased you down the road
To nowhere
Took you for a savior
When you were nothing
But a bait of Lucifer
Release me
From this love
That offers me no grass
To put my bare-feet on
That offers me no sky
To send a prayer to
This love…
Like a black hole
Sucking me deeper
To feed your titanic ego
Let me go
I don't want the Eden
Your smile seems to promise me
Let me go
To burn in hell
For no damnation
Is worse than
An unrequited love.

Thursday, July 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: cynicism ,love,pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poem is not necessarily a reflection of the poet's personal emotions.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 25 July 2019

A poem carrying great substance emanating from the feelings and emotions of poetess! I wanted to put spotlight on the depth of your inner expression: Took you for a savior/When you were nothing/But a bait of Lucifer...I call it poetry when a poet expresses his/her heart, feelings and emotions………an excellent poem!

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Nosheen Irfan 25 July 2019

Gratitude sir! Humbled and honored.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 July 2019

After going through the poet's notes, I feel you have reflected somebody's emotions through your pen! Whatever may be, this is a fabulous poem!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 July 2019

A very powerful write. The emotions put on this marvelous write is so intense that a reader could be carried away with the thoughts of the brilliant Poetess. Very stirring and beautifully written. To my Poem List.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 July 2021

The portal of Lucifer's character makes the poem great..an excellent poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 September 2019

Let me go! ! ! Love and pain; Come along and, Release me! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 August 2019

Let me go To burn in For no damnation Is worse than An unrequited love......emotion regarding love and pain is touchingly expressed here. Dear madam, you have so astutely and movingly inscribed this poem for which it is a brilliant one.10

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Nadeem Ishaque 30 July 2019

I dedicate this poem to Anteros, the Ancient Greek god of requited love, on behalf of the poet. For Anteros, love could only be requited love. He had a special disdain for those who didn't return someone's sincere love. Anteros brought misery upon them. He was the brother of Eros.

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 July 2019

Hi Nosheen, What a violent revelation: “”no damnation Is worse than An unrequited love. “ Lovely Poetry. A 100+++++++++ and onto MyPoemList, so that I am reminded to come back for a re...

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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