Reminicenses In Lock-Down 2 Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Reminicenses In Lock-Down 2

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the low lands are calling
eager to respond

they offer me hospitality, so move
without having to prove

the huge water begins to move,
beckons me to come to see the proof

a difficult decision
to choose the right position

i can't choose both
i have to make the right conjunction

i have to think carefully
this will determine my future appelation

i choose the low lands
with all the stressful strands,

with all the crowded beaches,
'n the orange apples 'n peaches

only by making the right choice
is the step to the true life, my true love

i choose the low lands with the huge water beaches
'n the proud apples 'n peaches

and i will never stop thinking
then good will always beckoning

i choose the huge water
since i can keep my head above water

and i've an appropiate excellent feedback
my handsome husband, champion in swimming

and i will feel at home forever
in this satisfactory life,

'n our dear Lord Who is closest
perpetually

Reminicenses In Lock-Down 2
Monday, January 18, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: Lord,God
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Before going to the Netheralnds, must think thoroughly, settled there and formed a family with the man of my choice with whom I know, I will be happy for a very long time and not just for a few time, since he believes in the same God as I do. God gives His Blessings constantly, not only the smallest but also the huge things, please do enjoy this poem wherefore I thank you so much. God's Blessings! . The Dutch Orange Apples are from Google
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 18 January 2021

Low lands are calling eagerly. Lands are soft to greet new crops. Apples are loved by people. Feeling home forever is good. An excellent poem is well penned.

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Rini Shibu 18 January 2021

Nice flow of words and ryhme

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Varsha M 18 January 2021

This poem is full of hope love and life in hands of Lord. This is really beautiful. And i enjoy your duch apples they are appealing.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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