Return Of My Love Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Return Of My Love

Rating: 5.0


You came
In my afternoon
As a flying cloud-
Dense and thick with
Hopes and desires
Worth being watched.

You came
In my soundless desert
As an oasis of lyrics-
Sweet and inspiring
Full of enthusiasm
Worth being listened to.

You came
In my green less garden
As a singing bird
With albums of songs-
Melancholic and thrilling,
Filled me from within with hopes
Worth being echoed within heart.

Never did I anticipate
In such a tender age, you'd
Kindle within me, an urge to live
In every inch of the space around.

Tuesday, April 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Sharma Rimi 01 May 2016

I was both delighted and shocked as well at these lines... Never did I anticipate In such a tender age, you'd Kindle within me, an urge to live In every inch of the space around. Has anything happened in between Sir? However. beautiful and great work.10 for the poem. Seems Devi.

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Nothing so intimate dear..Its all about the pleasure Divine which Muni herself rendered in my dry life.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 13 May 2016

You cameIn my green less gardenAs a singing birdWith albums of songs-Melancholic and thrilling, Filled me from within with hopesWorth being echoed within heart. Beautiful work Sir. Would love to read this poem again and again. Thanks for the poem.

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 17 November 2017

You came In my green less garden As a singing bird With albums of songs- Melancholic and thrilling, Filled me from within with hopes Worth being echoed within heart. Thank you for sharing this poem 10+++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 25 August 2016

Never did I anticipate In such a tender age, you'd Kindle within me, an urge to live In every inch of the space around. A very nice and satisfying composition. Thanks for the share.10 for it.

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Bharati Nayak 04 August 2016

You came In my greenless garden As a singing bird With albums of songs Melancholic and thrilling Filled me from within with hopes Worth being echoed in heart- - - - Wow- -Stunningly beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Sabita Sahoo 12 June 2016

You came In my soundless desert As an oasis of lyrics- Sweet and inspiring Full of enthusiasm Worth being listened to. Beautiful poem with nice stanzas. Thanks.

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Thank you dear Sabita for the remarks. Regards. Yours Subhas

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

As a flying cloud! Nice piece of work.

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Thank you Sir for the lovely remark. My regards. Subhas

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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