Revive Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
Revive
Hello the sunset of my lonesome heart
Hello the sunrise of separation chart
Hello the lament of break up's hour
Goodbye the scent of nightly poems flower
Goodbye the story of friendship love
Goodbye the blue light of above
Goodbye the everlasting friend
Goodbye the beginning, goodbye the end
I'll ask the mirror of moon light
The tranquility of night
I'll ask the tomorrow dreams
The candle's gleams
To take care of you
If the springs of words aren’t beyond my ken
If the world doesn’t take my pen
I'll keep you in my heart to be alive
Goodbye the yellow leaves of my heart
Goodbye the shady side of my art
Hello the new fountain of eternity
Revive
(2008/9/21)
Ammmmmmazing composition/flow of verses/thoughts indeed......10
This is so very beautifully expressed poem....I really enjoyed reading it....10
very touchy words and phases you have used. hello and good bye are 2 extremes of life and inbetween these lines we are boubd to survive.
nothing easy the feeling of good bye.... too sad to carry on, but so real and comun too....
Nice piece: the poet's heart searches for the new fountain of eternity. Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded
Nice praise based on God's love. The poem revives, it keeps us alive in the poet's heart and searches to find the new fountain of eternity. Bravo. Go ahead, my poet. Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded
Very Beautiful! I am so glad that God's love is everlasting. We never have to say goodbye :) Hugs~
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/19/2025 2:37:38 AM # 1.0.0
A very well thought out poem, embracing all the bad things in your life knowing they are about to change, 10 Lynda xx