Autumn's Lips Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

This is beautiful metaphor woven into and through your clever wording....... first rate and a 10 from Fay.....

i like it. i've never read a season poem quite like this one. great write.

Autumn is my favorite time of year. I do like your imagery of kissing autumn's lips. I really enjoyed the poem. Well done, my friend, well done. A 10 from me. Richard

autumn is a beautiful days of falling maples I like it and I also like your poem.. great! !

Delightfully clever...I appreciate your poetic voice... Dorothy C.

A spring invitation In beautiful scented scripts....... beautiful and very poetic.. you have an endearing heart. thank u. tony

Great personification 'Autumn's lip' Of his toes winter stands on the tip graging the treetops he reads a letter and suddenly trips... Persian Nightingale, you out did yourself with the poem about autumn...vivid images and a fresh perception. A 10, exponentially

In beautiful scented scripts A message from the ladybird Who lives among the rose hips Rachel Ann Butler

i very much enjoyed this... i absolutely love autumn, i can't wait till august is over so autumn can come.. there's nothing better than new england's fall season... great write!

I love the autumn season. The way the leaves changes colors like our eyes when that certain someone makes us tremble.