Per. Nig.

Autumn's Lips - Poem by Per. Nig.

Of his toes
Winter stands on the tips
Grazing the treetops
He reads a letter and
Suddenly trips

A spring invitation
In beautiful scented scripts
A message from the ladybird
Who lives among the rose hips

The breeze gives the letter and leaves
As she sees the ice chips
The winter will never come
If you stop kissing
The autumn's lips


Comments about Autumn's Lips by Per. Nig.

  • (11/24/2009 1:31:00 PM)

    Great personification 'Autumn's lip'
    Of his toes
    winter stands on the tip
    graging the treetops
    he reads a letter and
    suddenly trips...

    Persian Nightingale, you out did yourself with the poem about autumn...vivid images and a fresh perception.
    A 10, exponentially
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  • (9/19/2009 6:36:00 PM)

    In beautiful scented scripts
    A message from the ladybird
    Who lives among the rose hips

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • (7/28/2009 4:41:00 AM)

    i very much enjoyed this... i absolutely love autumn, i can't wait till august is over so autumn can come.. there's nothing better than new england's fall season... great write! (Report) Reply

  • (7/15/2009 10:22:00 PM)

    I love the autumn season. The way the leaves changes colors like our eyes when that certain someone makes us tremble. (Report) Reply

  • Fay Slimm (3/13/2009 4:01:00 PM)

    This is beautiful metaphor woven into and through your clever wording....... first rate and a 10 from Fay..... (Report) Reply

  • (3/7/2009 11:22:00 PM)

    i like it. i've never read a season poem quite like this one. great write. (Report) Reply

  • C.R. Clark (12/21/2008 12:12:00 PM)

    Autumn is my favorite time of year. I do like your imagery of kissing autumn's lips. I really enjoyed the poem. Well done, my friend, well done. A 10 from me.
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  • (12/21/2008 2:59:00 AM)

    autumn is a beautiful days of falling maples
    I like it and I also like your poem..
    great! !
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  • (12/20/2008 3:53:00 AM)

    Delightfully clever...I appreciate your poetic voice...

    Dorothy C.
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  • C. P. Sharma (12/19/2008 1:03:00 AM)

    A highly poetic and exalted autumn. Its sweetness lingers on in my mind.
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  • (12/17/2008 11:08:00 PM)

    A delightful poem, 'great rime an blend', wonderfully depicted this message you send!
    Best wishes Shiraz! *10*! !
    Friend Thad
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  • (12/17/2008 11:56:00 AM)

    I love this one also
    Very beautiful
    Thanks for sharing

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  • (12/16/2008 8:01:00 AM)

    Beautiful lines for the favourite seasons in our hearts, Thanks for sharing the Contemporary important Work,
    With Prays and Regards,
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  • Sarah Sisson (12/13/2008 7:52:00 AM)

    Very well done...thank you for this one (Report) Reply

  • (12/12/2008 9:31:00 PM)

    good imagery
    kissing autumn's lips
    -10 anju
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  • (12/12/2008 3:00:00 AM)

    Very lovely and charming! 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 11, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 21, 2008

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