Revived….
most enthralling write
a heavenly treat to read
your well-chosen words,
as if i can follow the choice of your words....
how you choose them.....
It feels so close...
so familiar
as if i am with you
in your beautiful mind
life to me, so kind....
your lovely words
so well-known to me
the magical sphere you conjured
the big difference is
i am just a guest
in your poetical home
and you are the one who creates,
i love watching
your words come to a form.....
closing
the poet cycle's gate
our minds do resonate
do you remember Van Beethoven?
he listens with his eyes
i hear his sixth symphony
i love that so much
i constantly wish to tell you as such
for you:
sweet dreams and
good night, dear heart
keep on dreaming
they always come true
and
dream
a little dream
for me….
© Sylvia Frances Chan
Silent Saturday 11 April 2020.
A Wonderfully executed poem. An amazing allegory..10++++
We have to read a heavenly treat with motivating mind. Van Beethoven, he, who listens with his eyes is not only wonderful but remembered by many. And cleverly and patiently with much love you love watching each poetic word. This creates very interesting perception. Through perception we learn and through beauty of perception we teach. This poem is very interestingly and brilliantly penned with much care...10
Dreams always come true. When dreams are seen with positive and pure mind, as per positive vibration created, these come true. We have to dream beautiful things to materialize these. As per thought action is planned. Sweet dream and good night best wishes are well associated with a real dream. In this magical sphere every one is a guest and we honour each guest with affection.
So familiar! ! ! So kind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.