Rewarding Time Poem by louis rams

Rewarding Time

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the most rewarding time in life
is when i could sit and write
i write about things that were and things that can be
if i let my mind run free
and this is what came to me.

looking for someone who really cares
deceit and corruption is every where
it can be found from the highest
hill to the lowest ground.
at every turn-just look around.

when you look at the news every day
another politician has gone astray
they go with people who can line their pockets
and when they're hooked
they pull out their eyesockets.

families are torn apart
and thats just the start.
because the loved ones did not
fill their hearts with greed
it was just an implanted seed.

the seed of corruption and despair
.is spreading out everywhere.

you'll see it in politics, sports, buisnesses.
and even in the churches, and schools
for this is becoming the golden rule.

this is what comes to me, and this is what i see.
all of them are living in pure hypocrisy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken Suh 15 January 2009

Wow! This is amazing because it describes our society so well! Your peom is amazing! ! ! ! Thanks for writing this! ! ! ! It has so much insight :)

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