I dreamed I rode the hills with Cowboy Ron,
and Smoky Hoss was there to ride with us.
Bri Edwards tried, but he could not stay on
his horse, so we left him, causing a fuss.
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The comments section is almost as good as the poem! Pure poet's gold!
Such a delightful and playful poem! I'm glad that I came across this today! I love fellowship of humor that you shared with your close PH friends!
What a fun and entertaining poem! ! ! Brilliantly composed! I wish these poets like Mr Bri Edwards, Cowboy Ron Williams, Smoky Hoss and Mrs. Susan Williams were still around, I pray that they are well wherever they are : )
Actually, Isadora, Smoky Hoss is still posting these days. You should check out his poetry. It is very good. Thank you for commenting.
Faving YOU, Susan. I wish you were still posting and hope you are well.
hahahahahah--now my husband is giving me the evil eye but I laugh at him and give him a wink and gallop away into the night ---then I return and show him Kim's disclaimer! if it doesn't work, I'll never bail Kim out of jail again
Susan, thank you for playing the game. Your husband knows you are not to blame.
Was this really a dream Kim? Somehow, I seem to recall the very same experience... except of course, Susan did wink at me!
Smoky Hoss, I must disabuse you men--I cannot wink--I try and try but both my eyes close instead of one which id dangerous when I am driving a car so I always practice winking riding a horse
The fact that this is humorous almost makes one overlook the fact that it has some very nice rhymes and beautiful images. Well done!
I WOULD translate this poem into Swahili, but, alas, I don't 'know' Swahili. ; ( bri
I can understand YOU THREE (kim, ron, smoky) calling yourselves 'cowBOYs', BUT bri, I, edwards goes by CowMAN! ! ! Remember that.
So does that mean that you can ride a cow, but can't stay on a horse? : )
Actually Bri, I prefer the handle: Vaquero. But for you perhaps tis better translated: loco vaquero!
I THINK I left stars, but don't see them now; oh, the sun (another very special star) is out.
Susan saves all of her winks for her horse I think. But, one can dream! five stars. I'd make it 6 stars, but I suffered a concussion when I hit the ground and don't remember HOW. ;)
Timber, thank you so much for the multiple comments.