Right In My Vision Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Right In My Vision

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Every law is wonder and right
In my vision I feel this truth
There is equal return to action
But love is eternal we hold on.

You are miraculous father of us
Our love for you is definite
We search you always in Earth
By watching nature we feel this.

Every right duty is nice we do
This build resolve on practice
Very nice scene you have given
This universe is drama stage.

Early dawn or lade dusk defines
Eternity and change are miracles
Only we perform drama in wheel
Time is powerful thread of us.

Monday, December 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Chowdhury 14 December 2015

Beautifully expressed the value of time.

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Dogma Daniman 18 October 2020

Every natural laws is definitely wonderful. This poem is very interesting and motivational poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of Bipin Churchung Rabha xGreat job Sir! Tfs 15 Dec 2015 by Bipin Churchung Rabha | Reply picture of Fay Slimm xI agree wholeheartedly with these fine sentiments dear poet-friend - - if we see what is before us our vision will be full of created beauty in nature. An inspiring read. 15 Dec 2015 by Fay Slimm | Reply picture of laura duran xA mesmerizing poem. So beautifully presented. I love it. 15 Dec 2015 by laura duran | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xBeautifully penned..quite delightful dear Kumarmani. Thank you for sharing. 15 Dec 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xThis is most divine poetry straight from the heart, such a very touching, uplifting poem and so majestically rendered, these words come only from a pure heart filled with true love for our Father. Yes! Right in our vision and on earth, the place where we reside. We can watch it everyday all time long, but only a few of us is aware of these all. One loyal man like you, my most appreciated poet. Sure our days will be blessed oft, IF we have your insight. Thank you for sharing this enthralling piece, Sir. 15 Dec 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Nishu Mathur xProfound and thought provoking. Very well written. 15 Dec 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply picture of Mizzy.. xInspiring thoughts transferred to poetry with skill...... 15 Dec 2015 by Mizzy.. | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x...........an excellent write, reads beautifully ★ 15 Dec 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xReally nice piece you have created here 16 Dec 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xBeautiful ink my dear friend xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings 16 Dec 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 December 2015

Laws are much needed in life to guide us along. Nice work.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 December 2015

Every religion is a law written in a particular language but love is the essence of all the laws its written in the universal body language and read by heart. A wonderful poem Mahakul Ji.

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Hazel Durham 15 December 2015

A beautiful write, you capture the essence of life as we journey through the good and bad that this life offers us, we search for the eternal love of God!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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