Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 184,204 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Rising This New Ray - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

From the womb of Eastern Sky
Taking birth child sun is new
With new crying of light this
We feel cheerful moments sure.

From last death at last evening
We have witnessed dull rays
These are rising now with vow
On birth we feel these glitters.

Mind blows to have wind in row
Freshness scribbles new thought
I witness a special new ray for
My life becomes righteous pure.

Rising this new ray to give joy
This will teach wisdom of life
By boon of father we stand here
We see this new horizon new sun.

Topic(s) of this poem: life and death, morning, nature


Comments about Rising This New Ray by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/17/2016 5:39:00 AM)


    Freshness! ! Wisdom and life; with the muse of nature. Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

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  • Hazel Durham (12/1/2015 9:47:00 AM)


    The beauty of nature has a huge impact on people as they watch the rising sun in awe of it's glorious splendour, it's rays warm our hearts and souls with joy that shine from our eyes!
    Great write, so beautiful!
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/25/2015 8:35:00 AM)


    Yet another masterpiece, after reading your poems I feel like I should live with nature rather than in concrete jungle.10++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 24, 2015



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