I am rising, I am rising in mind
Bind me not in the dark I am still
I am stable with my vision and love
I know you very well dear father.
Rising to light my life is definite
I know you give boon ever at moment
That is why I do not urge but I get
Meeting with you is too fixed in luck.
I write my fortune by my action only
This determines my birth's direction
I know I act here as per law of nature
Still I am rising towards truth daily.
I am the new sun in sky of my hopes,
I rise to reflect rays of my love
You teach to do so by practice ever
Obeying your command I am rising sure.
The poem reflects a life which is happily 'Obeying your command I am rising sure' but at the same time dedicating oneself to karma or action to be able to claim God's bliss. Amazing poem indeed. I write my fortune by my action only This determines my birth's direction
Using the mind positively to help all mankind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
'I am rising, I am rising in mind Bind me not in the dark I am still I am stable with my vision and love' awesome lines, the gift before continuum, the work in poetic completion
I am new sun in sky of my hopes I rise to reflect rays of my love You teach to do so by practice ever Obeying your command I am rising sure- Marvelous reflections of enlightened feelings.
Beautiful soliloquy with positive attitude, hope and full of self confidence. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'I am the new sun in sky of my hopes, I rise to reflect rays of my love' is very positive. Full of hope the lines flow so sweet.