Romantic Time Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir

Romantic Time

Rating: 5.0


You are my whole on my trip,
I love to travel on your ship.

My hope is to reach that land,
To give you a red flower by my hand.

You make me feel in peace,
You divide me into many pieces.

We are alone at that place,
We are rarely in that case.

We are alone in this room,
When my red flower starts to bloom.

I muse on your face under the full moon,
When my favorite music blasts to drum.

After you read my letter,
You make my mind quieter,
By your smile so sweeter.

Romantic Time
Monday, January 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: flower,love,moon,romantic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 29 February 2016

Nice imagery, nice flow and lovely romantic poem....I missed some of your poems written this year....10++++

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Abderrahmane Dakir 29 February 2016

Thank you Mr. Asim for reading this poem.

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Sofia Kioroglou 15 February 2016

Love it! Beautiful poem

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Abderrahmane Dakir 15 February 2016

Thank you Sofia for reading.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 January 2016

So simple still beautiful and touching, a lovely poem.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 26 January 2016

Thank you for your lovely comment.

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Driss Ezzireg 25 January 2016

Lovely piece.So romantic.Thanks SI Abderrahmane.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 25 January 2016

Thank you so your lovely comment.

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Melvina Germain 18 January 2016

A delightful poem from the heart, love shines.....

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Abderrahmane Dakir 18 January 2016

Thank you for reading. You have a great feeling not only on writing but also on reading.

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