Rubaiyat... Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Rubaiyat...

Rating: 5.0

Thoughts mix and mingle, like the waves of the ocean.
They walk free from human command;
Confusion arises and resolves,
And life moves on and on....

Tuesday, August 29, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: confusion,ocean
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 30 August 2023

Excellent four liner.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 September 2023

Very Beautiful how did I miss this one? TFS and Bravo! ! ! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 September 2023

Indeed so true, like NMrs. Indira says here: Sans thinking life will not move.5***** Wonderful Rubaiyat, Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir. Liked it a very lotot.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 11 September 2023

Beautiful analogy, Asim. Five stars

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Indira Renganathan 02 September 2023

Nature of life is such....without thinking life will not move...only days go on....liked

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 September 2023

You have brilliantly and succinctly depicted human nature in relation with life. Beautifully crafted.

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