M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,438 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Rubaiyat - Bitter Truth - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

If you fall, I’ll be there said floor to me
And I’m flat since then, I’m humble,
And down to earth after realizing this bitter truth of life
when I die no one will carry me and embrace me other than earth.

Topic(s) of this poem: rubaiyat

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Rubaiyat - Bitter Truth by M. Asim Nehal

  • (11/21/2015 10:52:00 AM)

    This is fantastic Rubaiyat, Invictus. (Report) Reply

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  • Souren Mondal (11/17/2015 12:19:00 PM)

    Yes. Somewhere down the line when we stand all a lot of people come and shake hands with us, and when we fall no one stands beside us.. A very well written poem Asim.. Thank you for sharing... (Report) Reply

  • (11/17/2015 12:09:00 PM)

    A philosophical tone in this rubaiyat, Catching up with, Asim Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Liza Sudina (11/17/2015 10:13:00 AM)

    Interesting what waits us there. Great speed, I think! (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/17/2015 8:57:00 AM)

    nice poem, beautiful ending, yes it is the bitter truth, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/17/2015 8:03:00 AM)

    Yes you are philosophically right. After death bodies are embraced by Earth only. Realizing this bitter truth of life is very amazing. Wise sharing...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 17, 2015

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