M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,505 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Rubaiyat - Permanent Place - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

This dust will surely settle down, one day.
Yet journey will continue from places to places.
Do not offer me any permanent place to dwell
When life is moving on why should I stay at one place?

Topic(s) of this poem: life and death, rubaiyat

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Rubaiyat - Permanent Place by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/3/2016 4:39:00 AM)

    Life! This dust will surely settle down one day. Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/22/2015 10:08:00 AM)

    Superb Rubaiyat from you once again, liked it very much. (Report) Reply

  • Rigzen Angmo (11/22/2015 7:55:00 AM)

    Put down very simply and beautifully! (Report) Reply

  • Rigzen Angmo (11/22/2015 7:54:00 AM)

    Put down simply and beautifully! (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/21/2015 5:52:00 PM)

    Dust settles down and journey of life continues with glitter of light. A very interesting poem shared definitely.10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/21/2015 11:55:00 AM)

    Moving is the essence of life but to make house is essential to settle down. Great message man. (Report) Reply

  • (11/21/2015 11:41:00 AM)

    only death will force you to settle down in one place
    thanks Asim
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 21, 2015

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