Sand Sculpture Comments

quite deep... it's good.

the last three lines are the cap of the poem. i relished 10 marks

so Deep Imagination! these thoughts must be exteriorized indeed! ! ! thanks for sharing a sandy TEN!

Marvelous fusion of imagination and reality! Its a masterpiece. A sweet 10.

just simply a lovely poem... it's worth to ponder on... Nice work! ! ! ^-^

such nice imagery to describe that everything, an emotion or physical beauty are temprory.thanks, i loved it!

and to think that i almost missed reading your poetry...wonderful, indira....this is what really enjoy...egocentrism and the realization...wonderfully brought out.

Exulting Indira! AM BLESSED for this GIFT during this Nav-Rathri : -)

what a beautiful thought weaved up into a lovely poem...sand particles lose their identity and disappear when the waves of reality wash it away...10/10!

high on my foolish vanity i dared to dance on the tip of waves forgetting that i’m but a piece of carefully arranged sand particles the sea with its inimitable roar came in rolling urgency and simply pulled me into its embrace Beautiful metaphor- 'I am but a piece of carefully arranged sand particles', which has to rearrange again and again with the tides of sea before it takes the shape of beautiful pearls.... Abeautiful poem Indra.

beautiful.........it goes deeper than it reads

So good. Indira you have started probing the outer and inner circles of life so well. Wish to read more such poems from u.

Both physical and metaphysical...a pleasure to read.

You have a beautiful way with words and a fine command of metaphor.10/10 Kind wishes, Sandra

the sea with its inimitable roar came in rolling urgency and simply pulled me into its embrace..lovely one i consider sea as your........and even if u were a sand scultures... powerful embrace from is real joy as agisn you hve merged with sea. poerfultheme with purpose... i loved it....10 read mine mary to mary......love at first sight

Artistic choice of diction, scintillating imagery and transitoriness vis-a-vis eternity heighten the poetic beauty of this poem. I enjoyed it. CP

A beautiful write capable of multiple interpretations. A perfect 10.

......................................am speechless.