Satyawati -24 Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Satyawati -24

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24. Amba, The Princess in Love

The princesses were named
Amba, Ambika and Ambalika.
They were so beautiful that
The prince's face lit up.

But Amba refused to alight
From the chariot, she was in love
With Prince Salvan and would
Only marry him, or die willingly.

She could not disclose her love
To her father, sure he would refuse
For Salvan was a prince, namesake
Of a little state, almost unknown.

She begged Devabrata to let her free
So, she could marry Prince Salvan.
Devabrata did not hesitate
To send her to Salvan, with all honor.

Disappointment was written
On the face of Vichitravirya-
Amba was the most beautiful
And famous for her knowledge.

Our astonishment knew no bounds
When she returned downcast
Having been turned down by Salvan
As she was abducted by Devabrata.

Vichitravirya looked at her longingly
But she didn't even turn to look at him;
She wanted Devabrata to marry her
For, he was the reason for her plight

And he was responsible to remedy it;
Refused again by Bhisma citing his vow
She accused him of behaving like a eunuch
Cursed him to death in the hands of one.

Devabrata remained unfazed!

She stormed out of the palace
In a fit of anger. It was heard
That she was doing penance
To be reborn, to slay Bhisma.

Fear gripped me;
But Devabrata didn't lose his calm!

Friday, November 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This part of the story is narrated in "Ambopakhyaanam" in the epic. But I am not following her, for I have to return to Satyawati and her son.
So, in the next episode, we shall continue to discuss that story.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017

Name of princess was given Ambika and this was nice. You have beautifully narrated the story here is interesting. An amazing poem from series is nicely shared...10

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I have received message that Dr Dillip K Swain has shared his thoughts on this poem. However, it is not seen on the page. Where has it disappeared? Can PoemHunter help us?

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Rebecca Navarre 18 September 2018

Ever so moving all the way through! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Susan Williams 12 May 2018

I like Amba's spirit but I guess we wave farewell to her- she did reveal the character of Devabrata. Looking forward to continuing the story of Satawati and her son. I do enjoy this serial storytelling style of yours!

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 May 2018

And the story has a number of intrigues, it reveals some of the customs of the yore..

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 May 2018

Thank you Susie, for finding time to read- continue with- the series. Please try completing it. This story-thread is the base on which the story of the entire epic has been built. For every development, the reason lies here.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 December 2017

A powerful portrayal of Amba - the most beautiful! Amba's character has always intrigued me - a very special lady of high values.

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 April 2018

Hi Geeta, As I have written, the Sage had devoted an entire chapter for Amba. I have not done her justice, for I have to follow Satyawati. Thank you Geeta. Appreciation from you, whom I adore as a talented poet, makes my day.

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Rini Shibu 03 December 2017

Furious Amba the mist beautiful girl been refused by 2. Men. Well penned

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 December 2017

Hi Rini, I have posted one more episode in the series. Try reading it..

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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