Wanna cut down that tree?
You have to pay a fee
Do you know your killing our planet
You don't even have to plan it
Destruction is in your blood
What would happen if there were a flood?
Would you be saved
Or would you have caved?
Stop ruining it more than you have to
Because it loves you
Don't let it die to look cool
You'll end up looking like a fool
Protect it and it will last longer!
Nice meaning throughout. I have written a similar poem and like yours better.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Mother Earth. Your message is a good one.3rd line down in your poem, should be you're killing our planet. Sorry, I'm editing again. But! I am reading your poetry! I only tell you about a word that can be corrected, only to add to your poem. You as a writer want your poem to be all it can be, right? Smiles! :) DC