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Observe this well
By using love science
I'll prove my love's true!
Let's start with math's
study this heart
measure the perimeters
of love symmetric pool
around my axis
mathematically means
I love you.
Try romance where
roses dance in red
intimacy is spread
upon violet's bed
you'll never find a lover
sweeter than me!
In sexology
Where current flows
back and forth
electricity breaks the door!
It's easy to feel
sexually I love you
Try magic
You see it's here **
it disappears....
ab-ra-cu-da-ra
I love you **
Try chemistry,
you and I
chemically mixed
means chemically
I love you.
Gaze into a microscope
look! every microscopic piece
of my heart proves my love is real
Analyze my atoms,
automatically, they love you.
Now let's do the math, I mathematically,
romantically, sexually, magically, chemically
microscopically and automatically love you.
Yes it's true!
Scientifically I love you.
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copyright © 2010 July 19
...... Eyan Desir
Write comment. Wonderful piece, Eyan. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks
A good poem.I laughed all through.The scientific imagery adopted is palpable and pulsating.Keep writing.
Fantastic loveless journey. The poet has much tried to prove its velocity and inertia. As a reader, feeling very much relaxed considering that I will not have to try this complicated mathematics any more to prove my love is there, at least, in this writing. Thank you for bringing poetry in the laboratory manner as a guineapig. Intelligent experiment. Enjoyed. Regards, pranab
Like a fresh air in smothering psyche … thanks sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
amazing poem....lovely to read