Eyan Desir

. A Sucker For Love (Dark)

From winter freeze
To summer heat
The fire still rages
Am I captured by love?
Keys to her heart

Will not open
But open for others!
Sweet thoughts comes to light
Throughout the night

When dawn comes near
My mind will clear
While reality creeps back


She will not be my flower in bed!
Since she is a loyal angel
Clouds of hatred cover my heart


Because she will never be mine!
But her thoughts always float on my mind
Cupid send me the bloody keys to her heart!


Time flows whiles ashes blows
Through summer heat
To winter frezee
Still the fire burns inside



All rights E.Desir 26 Sept 2009

Poem Submitted: Monday, September 28, 2009
Poem Edited: Sunday, March 21, 2010

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  • Cynthia renee (11/22/2009 12:54:00 AM)

    wow you use unbelievably beautiful language in your poetry.....its amazing

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  • Katherine Azanon..god Is Love3 Love Is God (10/12/2009 4:30:00 PM)

    wow....i have no words..good job...my eyan..

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  • Chris G. VaillancourtChris G. Vaillancourt (10/11/2009 5:16:00 AM)

    Love, the elusive thing! Well done

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  • Last hakkaobake (10/10/2009 2:56:00 PM)

    there are word that can never be spoken in the wake of your poems but we who comment on them try the best we can.
    cold frost or summers heat, our souls alone we can not complete. thanks as all ways for a great read.10

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  • Catrina Heart (10/8/2009 8:57:00 PM)

    we all a sucker of love indeed, since all human beings need to love and be love. Poignant it is yet you have made a powerful poem, dark for your chosen words......Love truly is a mystery, we dont know sometimes the key to one's heart..... sometimes we think so hard yet the answer is just simple how to melt the frozen locked heart...you are doing great my friend........loved your poem! ! ! I wonder who is the lucky woman who have captured ur heart? ? ? 10s

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  • Rebecca Harvey (10/8/2009 3:03:00 PM)

    i love this poem it is so DEEP and HEARTFELT i think you are an amazing poet i also love the way it rolls of the tongue i would love to see, ore poems like this

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  • Patrick A. Martin (10/6/2009 5:30:00 PM)

    Nice piece Eyan guess we've all been a sucker for love at some time.

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  • Danny H (10/4/2009 5:34:00 PM)

    The point of view, was terribly clever
    keep it up :)

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  • Angel's lyre (10/4/2009 7:07:00 AM)

    sad but beautiful, nice written. try to enjoy your life and be happy. I bless you in the name of Jesus!

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  • Tharindu AtukoralaTharindu Atukorala (10/3/2009 8:41:00 PM)

    Clouds of hatred cover my heart, because she will never be mine.. you have captured human emotions very well in this poem..very well written poem and thanks for sharing your work with me..10 ++

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  • Lynn Glover (10/3/2009 6:43:00 PM)

    Good poem, Eyan, lost love, very good write. thanks for the invite. lynn

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  • Obinna Eruchie (10/3/2009 9:57:00 AM)

    'From winter freeze / To summer heat / The fire still rages / Am I captured by love? / Keys to her heart / Will not open / But open for others! / Sweet thoughts comes to light / Throughout the night...', touching lines.

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  • * Stephen *king (10/3/2009 8:10:00 AM)

    The good poem eyan...............keep up the good work..........but one must not be bittter in love..

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  • The Lost.. (10/3/2009 7:51:00 AM)

    nice poem, happy to read it and thanks for the invitation :)

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  • Ramin ChamanRamin Chaman (10/3/2009 7:42:00 AM)

    A nice poem..and sweet..and a little a sad sight.

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  • Mubeen SadhikaMubeen Sadhika (10/3/2009 7:39:00 AM)

    great feeling. amazing narration. wonderfully written

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  • Srishti ds (10/3/2009 7:36:00 AM)

    sad piece..nicely penned..

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (10/1/2009 8:12:00 AM)

    Passionate and painful Eyan with great strong imagery. 10 Karin

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  • Lady Grace (9/30/2009 6:00:00 AM)

    'She will not be my flower in bed!
    Since she is a loyal angel
    Clouds of hatred cover my heart
    Because she will never be mine!
    But her thoughts always float on my mind
    Cupid send me the bloody keys to her heart! '...these lines are so nice my dear rabbit..cheers for this poem...

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  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (9/29/2009 9:56:00 PM)

    sad...yet...sweet...
    Love is....sometimes like that...
    We seek and we found
    We love and lost...
    The title runs with depth...pain in it..
    great...words are hitting to the heart..
    10

    Lovelots,
    maia

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