. What I See In You Poem by Eyan Desir

. What I See In You

Rating: 3.2

I see one rose
That isn't red
A flower called my friend
One special lady
Maybe I am crazy
Nothing is sweeter
Than seeing you smile
It invigorates my life

I see a bottle of wine
With a diamond inside
That brightens my eyes
And makes me wise
Nothing is better
Than seeing you're mine
It stimulates my mind

I see a mountain
With an angel behind
We can't complain
I am one lucky guy
Nothing is lovelier
Seeing you on my side
It feels like paradise

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Miriam Maia Padua 03 April 2009

very lovely piece, my friend i love how every stanza flows the rhymes is like a caress... very gentle... 10+ Eyan _maia

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sumaira .....ir 04 April 2009

G8! ! wat a flow.. lovl tribute.. 10/10 :))

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Yvonne Selase 05 April 2009

this poem just flows easily. i love it. lucky lady, who ever she is. good work eyan

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Myrtle Thomas 06 April 2009

This is such a great tribute to wonderful lady in your life Evan, you are both lucky to have this affection, in to days world even compassion is rare.A river flowing so smooth is this piece even an art piece.Thanks. A 10

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Identification Accepted 09 April 2009

wow. wonderful read and very passionate 10+

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Charity Nduhiu 16 January 2015

Nothing is lovelier seeing you on my side It feels like paradise. It is very true.

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Golda C Alexander 23 October 2012

This is SWEET! It s a thing of joy to love and be loved in return... It is even sweeter when appreciated.

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Marieta Maglas 08 April 2010

wonderful lyric poem, my friend, very well written, lovely to read. 10/10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 05 April 2010

Exaltation of emotive element …’ I see a bottle of wine/With a diamond inside…’ fantabulous… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Sonya Berry 20 November 2009

I <3 Love it..what else is there to say? ?

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