'Scorned' Poem by Bernard Snyder

'Scorned'



She constantly reminds me
she is a woman scorned,
her heart has been abused
and severely torn (but I want her nonetheless)
see the oddity of it all is
she thinks I'm attractive
she likes my qualities
but the matter of fact is (she's afraid to trust anyone)
so I thought I'd take her hand
and walk with her slowly
give her an opportunity
to really get to know me,
but every once in a while
I tend to get a lil' ‘frisky',
I ‘ll whisper in her ear hoping
she'd lean over and kiss me, (but she keeps her space)
I seriously think
she would like to cross the line
let her hair down a little
and show me she's really trying,
but instead of engaging
in anything that might leave her weak,
she always end the night early
with a pleasant ‘kiss' on my cheek!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
La Donna Woods 27 June 2016

Seems like a woman still in excruciating pain mentally. Sad, and afraid of love.

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Stephen W 23 December 2014

A fine piece of work, quite moving, and pleasantly lacking in the usual melodrama about love.

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Guy Lip-more 01 August 2012

Lovely poetry, told plainly. I've only read two poems by this poet, like his style.

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The poem is more of showing your true love for the person behind the scene. This is something that really happens in life. I relate to it myself'; loving someone still dearly even though they have messed around and have being ridiculed before.

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