We found them hidden
Yes they are miracles
What they are made of
The subatomic particles
How they look like!
Can I grip one!
If earth is an electron...
Nucleus should be sun!
...
If these are the windows
To the secret of the world
Little I can open
Little I can see
If these are the gates
To a more amazing world
How can I pass!
Where is the key!
Many of the mysteries of life remain hidden to us! No sure passage is open to them! Great write, Muhammad!
Yes, Ali the structure of an atom is very much similar to that of solar systems. How much insignificant we are in this universe! A great thoughtful poem.
i read a wonderful poem by MJ Lemon, and after that i found another good one here...i really loved it you know i always have this in my mind even i revisited this thought few days ago but here we go you tell us here: If earth is an electron... Nucleus should be sun! and the poem executes...very fine! :) where is the key? but the first question how big the lock is! so we can look its match!
Electron, proton, atomic and subatomic particles are science terms which are hidden and create miracles. Dear Ali you have aptly and astutely inscribed this poem on the base of science. Interesting to read. Thanks for sharing.10
If we are but tiny specks on the molecule that is our universe....what lies beyond is we cannot fathom. This is a brilliant work, Ali.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nucleus should be sun! where's the doubt all revolves about the NUCLEAUS SUN Have you not read my bestest poem my MOM'S SMILES kindly do.......you will like it too since ur an upcoming poet too