One...
Though, there are scenes in billion
If every eye can read the slogan!
Two...
I am to live within all of you!
O God, if my dream comes true! !
Three...
I become bored, so long being 'me'
If I were a flower, a star... or a tree! !
Four...
What I am made of! my coat and core?
So harsh, so calm, so sweet, so sore!
Five...
We are the waves, till shore we survive...
You are the OCEAN... Live and Live!
pretty nice thought provoking composition writen with numbers for enumeration...10
Your thoughts are vibrant and profound.an assortment of a different emotive ideas. Very beautifully scripted! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Good luck!
Sweet explanation to your thoughts....great title too. Well written....Merna
The counting is an anchor...as we give in to it, we focus and our vision becomes clearer...A terrific poem, Ali.
A thought provoking poem......................................................
I like the counting- adds a distinctive touch to the piece. Well-penned!
Very profound piece of work. Written with flair n poetic intuition. Filled with wisdom. Full marks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
one... two...three...four...five...the 'wave' dies out here in the lap of the 'shore'...beautiful insightful stanzas Ali...the last one is really good...a truth very beautifully told there...10