***seeing You***

Rating: 3.4
this is the moment that i have dreamt of all my life.

a moment that has no troubles or strife,
every thing that is a wish or desire, in your eyes

i know for sure that with you the limit are the skys.

let me dream and fanticize, though it may not be real

let me imagine that these emotions, you too can feel.

live through this blessed moment, and play it in your mind

perhaps, just maybe, you feel everything what ive hoped to find.

i wont jump to conclusions, its not the right thing to do,

i will wait here patiently, waiting till you feel it to.

if you already have your emotions figured out,

and you know exactly what ive been talking about,

then take a step, make a move, show me theres something there,

something that i can hope for; and that this is not just a stare.

you stare into my eyes, and they say so much to me,

but my heart longs for something more, something i hope they mean.

written 2-5-08
Tuesday, February 5, 2008
Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 05 December 2011
This is such a lovely poem...with beautiful rhyme.. Sweet one.
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Romeo Della Valle 06 November 2011
This your first love poem gives you away! It clearly shows your great feeling and poetic talent! It is so sweet to find oneself in such a lovely situation and have a happy end! I will check some more of your touching poems later! For this one,10+++ well deserved! God Bless You and keep inspiring the World with more of those beautiful writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...
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Ted M 21 August 2009
The loving thoughts of a princess waiting for that declaration of love from her prince charming.......Sweet and romantic write...............
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Eyan Desir 20 April 2009
beautiful as Always 10s
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Armando Hernandez 28 February 2008
another great poem that just happens to also relates to how i feel. i dont think ive ever met such an intiguing individual. you have great descriptive words. please dont ever stop writing...
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Malcolm Hetherington 06 February 2008
Great poem...i know how that feels too....and i write my poems for the same reason as you(thought i'd say that before i forgot)
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