M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,498 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 109 Logic Fails - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

All the logic fails
when mind wanders in thoughts of
a beautiful face

Topic(s) of this poem: life, logic, beautiful

Form: Senryu


Comments about Senryu - 109 Logic Fails by M. Asim Nehal

  • Valsa George (1/14/2016 7:16:00 AM)


    Only when mind is at rest, we will be able to think logically! When there is an unrest, though it is a sweet unrest, thoughts lose their logical sequence! Don't worry.... this is quite natural for an youngster like you! (Report) Reply

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  • (1/14/2016 6:22:00 AM)


    Not just logic everything else also fails............100000 (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/14/2016 1:47:00 AM)


    You are amazing observer. All logic fails while mind wanders. Wise sharing done definitely. Fantastic poem.10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (1/13/2016 4:07:00 PM)


    Indeed, thoughts are blurred when the heart races (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 13, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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