Senryu - 121 Make Me Immortal Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 121 Make Me Immortal

Rating: 5.0


dear, love me enough
before death closes our eyes
make me immortal

Senryu - 121  Make Me Immortal
Thursday, March 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and life,romance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 28 March 2016

Before death comes! Thanks for sharing.

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T Rajan Evol 03 March 2016

Ah what a senryu and cover picture liked it

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Darren Jkoeryo 03 March 2016

Immortal in words and in deed both so that the world will remember you like Layla-Majnoo, Pyramus and Thisbe, Romeo and Juliet

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Kelly Kurt 03 March 2016

In a transcendent moment of pure love, immortality is present

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Aarzoo Mehek 03 March 2016

a beautiful plea, straight from your heart. Sometimes few words speaks volumes.10+++++

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